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James Killough's avatar

My few bits as a marketing professional and creative director:

A snappy subject line on the email will get more views. Maybe something like "The Mindfulness Tip Every Good Educator Needs."

The text should be punchy, urgent: "Please step back and listen to the other side. It's all I ask." Why is this information urgent? Why do educators need to at least listen to the other side and look at the data? Would they teach subjects that aren't evidence-based? Make it clear that's what they're doing but in a compassionate way — their hearts are in the right place, but their loving-kindness has been abused by the identity politics of theorists. Most of them already know it, you just have to assure them it's okay, that they won't be threatened. Appeal to their respect for knowledge, don't attack.

Do NOT use exclamation marks or other forms of emphasis, like bold, italics and all caps! No shouting in writing — educators, like writers, are sensitive to formatting and punctuation. Your outrage has no place in the mission to get the right information to the people who matter; it's a symptom of the problem, not the cure for it. Keep it here, not out there. You already have the moral high ground and the superpower of being right and on the right side of history. Be resolute and firm; communicate calmly and emphatically.

I would separate the graphics of the book and the doc in two distinct paras in the email, doc first. The 'No Way Back' graphic is too weak, the modified caduceus cliché, pointing to nefarious capitalist intentions, which undermines the message and purpose of the email; most people hate being wrong and will go to great lengths to create justifications for what they've supported — see Trumpists and the 2020 election myth that 1/3 of the country believes.

I would embed the trailer from YouTube, assuming there is one, and customize the thumbnail with a screen grab of a detransitioner looking directly into the camera.

The book cover shouldn't be on an angle, just the graphic facing us. No 3-D book effect needed.

The explanatory text for both the book and the doc likewise needs to be punched up to snappy marketing copy, not blurbs. No tiny text, a Verdana set to normal, or 12 pts.

Great, memorable graphics and copy matter far more than most people realize.

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Stevanovitch's avatar

God lives in those like you who cannot sit still in the face of evil. 🙏🏽

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